Hey man, The song is pretty good and you clearly are a musician that knows what you’re doing so don’t beat yourself up about it. I’m pretty new to this site but I’ve done work in sound and production before. Firstly, the category you’ve placed your song under is one of the most popular in the whole site so the fact that you got your song approved is quite an achievement as the corporate-motivational section is quite saturated. So don’t sweat over it!! As for how to improve the piece, I’d really change the drums you’re using, the sound really robotic and aren’t suitable for this mostly acoustic piece. Try using sampled drums or a good acoustic loop. You could also do with switching up the drum patterns, you mostly use the same groove. Also the trumpet embellishments near the end sound a bit messy, I’d switch to simpler notes that sound cleaner. All in all it’s a nice song with good structure and ideas. The recommendations are just there to help you out man!!
Hey man, I’m pretty new to this site but I’ve done some work in this type of industry. What they’re talking about is the cleanliness of the sound and production, in order to use it for commercial purposes it needs to sound really engineered, I don’t think they’re criticising the composition or the actual music, I’d look over the audio file and check that there aren’t any messy sounding bits.
Hope that was helpful!