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MNKY says

Hi there,

This is my first theme and I would really appreciate your feedback on it, any critique and opinions are welcome. Have been rejected twice and completely rebuit it and would like some more improvement suggestions. (Portfolio is under construction)

Here is demo link:

Preview

Thanks in advance!

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immortality says

Really amazing theme, but in order to make it perfect you have to make changes.

  1. Fonts are not suitable, make it more sharp
  2. you have to change background or make it differently.
  3. Try to use 2 different fonts, more than 3 against the designing rules.
  4. Icons must be exact, not blur.
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webdesignerart says

amazing theme nice

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MNKY says

Guys, thank you for response and kind words.

immortality , will definately make those improvements. Big thanks for taking time to look and give some suggestions.

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MNKY says

Hi, our theme was rejected today and unfortunately with standard message:

1.Your template has a good start but, as we have high standards, you will need to make some additional improvements in overall aesthetics and aspects such as typography, graphics, and spacing. 2. There are a few inconsistent spacing/padding issues throughout the template. I’d like you to go over the design with a fine toothed comb and weed out these basic design issues. 3. Overall template typography needs additional refinements and improvements before it will be ready for Theme Forest. The template needs improvements in visual hierarchy primarily using typographic elements such as headings. 4. Try to make your theme’s design more unique. Adding features, options and styles will help increase your template’s value and increase its ability to be approved. However, a unique design will be a key factor for approval. 5. Even with the current design, a significant increase in the polish of the various aspects of the theme may just swing the decision in your favor. Right now, it doesn’t feel like a premium theme.

Would really appreciate some help here, if possible pointing out some issues or things that should be changed. Some things we plan to do: add style switcher to the preview, change background, maybe heading and navigation size. Although everything can be done in admin panel by user, but not sure if reviewer looked there this time.

Here is demo link:

Preview

Thanks in advance!

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dpthemes says

Posted a couple of notes there: http://cl.ly/7K4M

Hope it helps you.

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MNKY says

Posted a couple of notes there: http://cl.ly/7K4M Hope it helps you.

Thank you so much. Great suggestions, will work on it.

If anyone else has opinion on overall idea/design/details or anything else you’re welcome.

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RelStudios says

Hi MNKY ,

I saw your template…My eyes get stuck in spacing portion of the template….Here i can see lots of spacing problems throughout the template…:)..Typography is boring…( Better to change your font ) Design is too simple …Polish your design as far as possible..

Regards,

Satish

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MNKY says

Hi MNKY ,

I saw your template…My eyes get stuck in spacing portion of the template….Here i can see lots of spacing problems throughout the template…:)..Typography is boring…( Better to change your font ) Design is too simple …Polish your design as far as possible..

Regards,

Satish

Big thanks for reply, if possible, could you please point out what you mean with spacing, i can see few inconsistment problems, but just to get better idea, could you please tell more, so i can fix that. Thank you

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RelStudios says

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