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What can I say? You asked for opinions. You asked why it might have been rejected, I did my best to answer.

I’m not a reviewer, but I have been working and earning my living as a motion graphic designer for 20 years and it’s not a surprise to me why this was rejected.

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What can I say? You asked for opinions. You asked why it might have been rejected, I did my best to answer. I’m not a reviewer, but I have been working and earning my living as a motion graphic designer for 20 years and it’s not a surprise to me why this was rejected.
Thank you! I post a new project. Let’s see what happens next …. sorry that have to wait long queue
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But it was possible to put a price cheaper

Actually the price question comes AFTER the decision of rejection or approval. Videohive want to have only high quality files, it’s not like they want their marketplace flooded with bad files for 1$.

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But it was possible to put a price cheaper
Actually the price question comes AFTER the decision of rejection or approval. Videohive want to have only high quality files, it’s not like they want their marketplace flooded with bad files for 1$.
Thanks for the reply. It’s all right. It must be so. All projects are very different: dark, light and big and very small. My opinion is that there are projects and worse quality than mine. There are very interesting and not interesting. But to argue about it very hard. All projects are very different: dark, light and large and small and flat and 3D. Maybe personal opinion or mood checking is also important. Not easy, but my opinion is that but have to give specific comments for correction, and not generalities.
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Thanks for the reply. You are right. Experience a great thing. But there are projects that do not want to remodel again do render, package and execute. A lot of work and time. Sometimes it is easier to make a new project, and spend as much time. I hope that I will make fewer mistakes. Learning from my mistakes … )))

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@Cine…

Wise words from Plac…

My other top tip to you is…. study design

Before you reach for the mouse, before you reach for After Effects, before you think about computers, plug-ins or motion graphics or anything else, look at design… all around you: posters, signage, book jackets… anything you like. Ask yourself what makes good design. Ask yourself how much of the design you see around you looks like what you just made. Maybe buy yourself a book or two about the great designers of the 20th century. Look at what they did.

And don’t compare yourself to the worst (“there are other projects that are worse than mine”). Compare yourself to the best.

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Thank you for your good wishes…. all logical…

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I would start by Re-rendering this project with clear sky & a sunlight (not a sun..just a light with raytraced shadows).
Even with leaving the materials as is (white diffuse, little reflection).
Ease/Smooth your camera moves, and everything will look much better.
Here’s a city model I found and rendered for example: ( I added some bump too )

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doru
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camera movement needs more work but even with no texture you can get some decent results. Don’t know if the following example could had been approved but you get the idea hopefully. You need more quality and you will pass the reviewer test.

First image is your output video, second is the same screen with some color correction.

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Thank you! You have a good choice of lighting. The camera is not able to change – the original 3D file i is removed and returned to the project now does i not want: \

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