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indiapart says

Hello guys, my Under Construction Theme just got rejected and I am curious, if you have some feedback for me. Would be glad, if you told me.

There is a demo here: http://www.marlonmedau.de/demo/counter/

And some more screens:
There is a demo here: http://www.marlonmedau.de/demo/counter/blue.png
There is a demo here: http://www.marlonmedau.de/demo/counter/light.jpg

Should I completely change the theme to something like this? There is a demo here: http://www.marlonmedau.de/demo/counter/55.jpg

Best regards, indiapart

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Acj2323 says

Hi indiapart,

The them itself is nice in many aspects, the main thing I would change, is the actually design of the ‘flaps on the timer’ they need to re designed to be ‘fresher’ or more modern, the text on them as well needs to be changed, the lack of contrast (despite with the slight white shadow) really does not bid well and needs to be re-thought.

In regards to designing it like the last link (55.jpg) I think the first design is somewhat better the way its stacked on top of the image (as long as this is done right, with minimal mess and clutter). But what I really love with the new design is the visual status bar of the completion (0 – 100% ) and also the live feed from the desired twitter account, as user experience elements they are really great and defiantly should be implemented if possible.

I hope those comments help!

Regards,

Aaron

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indiapart says

Hi Aaron, I really appreciate your help and have done some updates on the countdown, so it just become a complete new countdown. I hope, I could make everything better, what you mentioned, so the whole theme is somewhat more modern, now. There also shouldn’t be any lack of contrast now, a progress bar is build in and the social icons are still there, even with a far better grey-to-color fade effect. I would again appreciate every feedback from you guys! http://www.marlonmedau.de/demo/counter2/

Best regards, indiapart

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