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dr_alien
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Hi, I made short commercial track and I would like to know your opinion about it. Is it good enough to advertisements ? Is the sound good ? What do you think ? https://soundcloud.com/dr_alien/happy-commercial
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ShadyMapleMusic
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Hi dr Alien, I think you are heading in the right direction. The first thing to do would be to replace the guitar with a real guitar recording. And the continue developing adding a B theme to the arrangement. Best of luck!

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dr_alien
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Thank you very much :)

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Waderman
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Hi, the guitar accords sounds very synthetic. Check out another VST that is more natural. The direction of the track is right.

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dr_alien
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Thank you for your advice Waderman :)

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