Template got rejected. Any advises please?

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Hi Aleluja,

I really really like your idea! Really! But here are the problems I am seeing:

- typography – specifically logo, boxes content, line spacing. The line spacing in the boxes is very low, give it some space to breathe

- this is strictly my personal opinion, but I don’t like the scroll things in each box. Maybe if you put a little arrow where, when I go with the mouse over it it scrolls automatically?

- not a fan of the background – I think it just doesn’t work with the general idea of this template – have I told you how awesome this idea is?

Good luck with it!

Gabi

Thanks Gabi for awesome reply

Typography is always bugging me, that’s the think I least understand in design, it’s always a problem for me.

The custom scroll bars is a plugin, I’ve tried to make all by myself custom scroll bars (since styling the default is impossible) but then comes to making it work with tablets :s I like all of your suggestions and will implement them

Thank again

Milan

Your demo link doesn’t seem to be loading.

Dunno, works for me.

I like it, but with the first look i dislike the logo i think this part need some improvement but the others are very good.

Nice idea. Two things to improve: 1) Change that logo 2) typography – learn from articles/tutorials/experiments.

Keep it up!

Thank you all for comments. I will work on it a bit later