Not ready for submission
Typography especially typefaces, spacing issues, alignment, way too much going on
Too much contrast. Too much yellow. Crowded. Ugly arrows. Too busy. The content has no room to breathe, it’s overcrowded by icons&arrows&contrast.
What’s with the alarm-clock icon? That is used to set alarms, not to point out that there is a time text.
Black designs always risky. You should be careful about contrast, colors, fonts as well as should be clean and user friendly design. Otherwise you won’t sales success.Check out below one. http://www.behance.net/gallery/NBA-com-Concept-UI-Design-(-Personal-Project-)/6310227
Turkish not:Baba bu tasarimi hic zorlama bence yada nasil temiz hale getirecegini arastir.