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But I had a listen and to me, it sounded quite empty. Decent melodies, but everything else sounded too… simple. You could maybe add bass or more percussion. Just my opinion.
I think you have on heck of a track here with some serious potential to be a great seller. But i must agree with ThomasVo that it could use a little thickening throughout the track.
By the way, i love that piano melody that you introduce a little over half way through the track. Musically, I think this track really rocks!
A very good track. I agree that a little bit more variation would make even better.
The only thing that I don’t like in the song is delay on the snare. I do like the stereo effect of it but I would use two different snares and with no (or less) delay.
But dude, a song with a lot of potential sells
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