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imaginem says

Hi,

My theme got rejected about 4 times.

The last advice i got was:

You have a good template going but at this point it will need much more additional improvements to meet our criteria. The template will need significant aesthetic improvements before being resubmitted.

http://www.revolutioncore.com/demo/mandarin/

What do you think is wrong?

Your advice will be most appreciated.

Thank you for your time.

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segen says

Hi imaginem.

It’s hard to give You any advice on design right now. I suggest You to browse trough TF templates and see how others have done it or find some inspiration at some popular CSS galleries.

Cheers.

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imaginem says

Segen, I have browsed. Any reflection on my theme link there would be helpful.

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SachaG says

The concept is nice, but you need to pay more attention to details. The “d” in mandarin looks a little weird. And the whole thing feels empty. It lacks a strong identity, right now it looks good but too generic, almost like a wireframe.

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imaginem says

Thanks Koroshia. :)

I wanted to keep it simple, but i think you’re right, should fill it in a bit.

Any other opinions will be well appreciated.

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