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Semenov says

Hi,

Just got rejected, because design should be “significantly improved”.

Please advise what to change

Skin1: http://dimsemenov.com/themes/touchfolio/demo2/
Skin2: http://dimsemenov.com/themes/touchfolio/demo/

Thank you.

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ThemeProvince says

Everything is up to scratch apart from the design of the pages.

I would buy it if it wasn’t for the design of those pages.

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margekint says

I love it, great theme.

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Semenov says

I would buy it if it wasn’t for the design of those pages.
Thank you for reply. Don’t know how can be improved block of text 40em width… Do you think reviewer disliked 16px font?
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Flay says

Very nice theme! I found just a one little thing – the top margin of the headline should be increased, so it match the logo. Screenshot: http://cl.ly/1I1G0N1T3g3G1V1K1G2l

(actually all margins and a line-height in the headline part could be revised)

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Semenov says

@Flay Thank you very much, haven’t noticed that. Was aligning second skin logo by baseline and accidentally shifted logo in first…

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GFlashedBureau says

Show me that reviewer, who rejected this awesomeness. Themeforest has a lot of themes that look same, overloaded with patterns and jquery plugins. This theme looks different, which is very rare and it gets rejected. HAHAHA . Nice job Envato.

p.s. Does it really works on b&w Kindle Keyboard?

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virtuti says

I also think it is very good (and by the way loveliest favicon ever), I would make alternative portfolio spreading over the page on full-width (not two columns like it is now).

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iamthwee says

This is deceptive, because you can’t appreciate the merit of this unless you’re browsing of an iphone or ipad. That being said, it still lacks the design to sell here on TF.

So customize the thing a bit more with some cool graphics.

Also, in a normal browser under chrome when you resize to mobile width, the top menu doesn’t display properly and juts out.

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aexmo says

I disagree with iamthwee, don’t add any more elements or patterns, it already looks very good and minimal. “Art” people will love it.

Website elements should not destract from portfolio.

What I’d add, is a tweet button near “pinit” and “like”.

Hope it’ll be accepted second time :)

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