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musicwizard
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Hi,
I ‘am just uploading a new Piano Soundtrack
Emotional Moments 3
https://soundcloud.com/musicwizardproducer/emotional-moments-3
What do you think ?
Hope you like it
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MValentino
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Left and right channels are unbalanced, and there’s too much velocity on right channel/hand, on some notes it sounds like you pushed the keys with too much strenght compared to left hand part and to the overall mood of the song. Between 0:09 and 0:10 there’s an error in left hand part, a dissonant note, that you don’t find when that part repeats, so it’s confirmed as an error.

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charly_jp
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Tune melody line’s velocity.
Usually playing “piano”-“meso piano”,climax playing “Forte” is good, I think.

Person who was reduced a little Midrange(about 1khz-2khz band) using the EQ is good. (Please ignore if the is intended)

Good luck :)

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Left and right channels are unbalanced, and there’s too much velocity on right channel/hand, on some notes it sounds like you pushed the keys with too much strenght compared to left hand part and to the overall mood of the song. Between 0:09 and 0:10 there’s an error in left hand part, a dissonant note, that you don’t find when that part repeats, so it’s confirmed as an error.

Wow, loved the way you’ve commented, brilliant and +1.

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musicwizard
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Thanks for all your Feedbacks
I’ll try to make them in consideration :) .

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MValentino
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Left and right channels are unbalanced, and there’s too much velocity on right channel/hand, on some notes it sounds like you pushed the keys with too much strenght compared to left hand part and to the overall mood of the song. Between 0:09 and 0:10 there’s an error in left hand part, a dissonant note, that you don’t find when that part repeats, so it’s confirmed as an error.
Wow, loved the way you’ve commented, brilliant and +1.

Really? Thank you :)

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I’ve made some changes and it sounds musch better now Emotional moments is now approved by audiojungle http://audiojungle.net/item/emotional-moments-3/5018385?ref=musicwizard Thanks MValentino, charly_jp, Ceku
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