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ShadowBeatZ says
hey guys, Some of my songs got rejected so, I’m quite insecure about uploading my newly made one. So if you guys could just listen to it and give me some advice please? i’d really appreciate it http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks Thanks and greets Thomas.
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wptitans says

Wrong link m8, here’s the correct one. Took it from your Facebook page

http://soundcloud.com/thomas-de-goey/forbidden-4
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ShadowBeatZ says

Thanks :D

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James-Lee-Grey says

No. Still wrong link. :bigsmile: Corrected: http://soundcloud.com/thomas-de-goey/forbidden

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James-Lee-Grey says

So if you guys could just listen to it and give me some advice please?
Well… I think it worth to add a bass line, cut a little somewhere in around 100 Hz from the snare, to diversify the drums line and do something with density of a track (+ mix can be made louder). Good luck! :)
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Your mix lacks clarity, it sounds too compact.
Simple fixes like playing with the pan and the EQ might be just what you need. For instance, and like James told you, the snare does not fit into the mix.
I would cut in the low frequencies as well, boost the mid-frequencies and probably add a subtle reverb.
For your main synth, I would play with the stereo image when it starts going fancy at around 0:30, and so on…
You can probably find good tuts on the ABCs of mixing over at Audiotuts+. Good luck.

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adammonroe says

I’ve had some stuff rejected and I think most of the time it’s just due to the production/mixing/ect. They really only like to approve stuff on this site that sounds well mixed. I think your stuff sounds cool though.

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ShadowBeatZ says
hey guys i really want to thank you all for the good tips ! they helped me out with my latest track Called “High Altitude” the track I needed advice for is somehow un available for editing so I started a new tune: http://soundcloud.com/thomas-de-goey

Is this better? :D

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ShadowBeatZ says

oh another question: I’m using garageband but, I can’t seem to get the music louder, so if anyone of you knows how it works please let me know :D

Greetz

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