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gvsmusic says

Hello everybody! I’m new here. For this moment there are 4 tracks ready. Please judge my tracks strictly, so that I can improve my music and write better.

Romantic Waltz A-minor: http://audiojungle.net/item/romantic-waltz-aminor/3661114 Heavy Cowbell: http://audiojungle.net/item/heavy-cowbell/3663125 Melody of the Sea: http://audiojungle.net/item/melody-of-the-sea/3663192 Piano Etude C-Minor: http://audiojungle.net/item/piano-etude-cminor/3661087

The next tracks you will hear will be an epic/cinematic trailer, a barocco music and dark intro. But they will be in a couple of weeks.

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TerriMatheson says

Hi gvsmusic!

Your underlying compositions are very nice ? I especially like Melody of the Sea ? but you really need to upgrade the sound quality by varying the dynamics, articulation, and tone of your different instruments. For example, a real clarinet sounds much different when playing its highest notes than it does in the lower register, and would vary the pitch with vibrato, use different articulation on short notes in rapid passages, and change dynamics more. Also, a real clarinetist would probably have to breathe at some point :) Right now, your tracks are a bit flat and monotonous, and better, more dynamic sounds will breathe life into your compositions.

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EvgenyEmelyanov says

Sound quality isn’t good as I think. I told you before. You could find me on vkontakte and we can help each other. Your arrgmnt. It’s sounds really great and professional.

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Celestial-Sound says

I left some comments on your stuff with my opinions! :)

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gvsmusic says

I left some comments on your stuff with my opinions! :)

posted a reply :)

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personiam says

i think your music is awesome, and i don’t see much priority for you to focus on writing better. However you could probably use more practice in mixing and choosing sounds—-> Experiment lots with panning, reverbs, m/s processing, compression, parallel compression, frequency analysers, phase etc . Try to watch pensado’s place on youtube for good tips. best of luck to you.

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