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Gembell says

=== Why We’ve Declined Your Submission ===

1) The overall aesthetics of the design could be improved with a font that’s better suited to the concept and refining the shape of the image.

2) The design needs further refinements to the layout and balance of the design.

3) The illustration is fairly complex, consider ways to scale and simplify the illustration to create a more balanced design and upload the strongest concept.

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MikeMoloney says

My tips would be to find a better font (obviously lol). Also may want to make the stem of the bulb simpler? Idk and maybe change the colors to looks cleaner? Those are the best tips I can offer. Good luck!

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Gembell says

My tips would be to find a better font (obviously lol). Also may want to make the stem of the bulb simpler? Idk and maybe change the colors to looks cleaner? Those are the best tips I can offer. Good luck!

Thank you MikeMoloney…..

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Clarke845 says

Since I am new here I don’t want to be too critical, but my biggest concern for you would be the colors.

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Gembell says

Since I am new here I don’t want to be too critical, but my biggest concern for you would be the colors.

Yeah, thanks Clarke845….

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ShermanJackson says

Yes Bro! The colors aren’t good…

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Gembell says

Yes Bro! The colors aren’t good…

Ok, i change it later…

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