This is the second reject on this logo I made the change advised on the first version which were improve the rain drops, I am a little lost on what to do to improve this item further, i have put too much time into it to just leave it now i just want to get it accepted.
Looks so nice, however because it wasn’t accepted I would suggest the following:
for you text: Make “C” capital as it should be Two Words “PrintCloud”
The logo seems a little too broad, so why don’t you add a single drop of rain in the cloud and have a gradient of all the colors, that way you could bring the cloud closer to the text.
+1 for the capital C.
I quite like the idea of having those multiple drops though… Maybe reduce their number to 3 and/or vary their size. This would add more variety and depth to the logo IMO .
Anyways, I think it is a awesome logo. I’m sure it’ll pass
Good luck with sales!
For me the problem is the logo image and text don’t sit that well together. I think maybe, drop the symmetrical composition, maybe it would work to have the rain falling from left to right, and have the cloud more on the left of the text. So the eye would flow from the cloud, down the rain, and read the text, like so:
oOo \\\ PrintCloud
That’s what I would try anyway
....That was fun making that little illustration