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DarkstarDesigns says

This is the second reject on this logo I made the change advised on the first version which were improve the rain drops, I am a little lost on what to do to improve this item further, i have put too much time into it to just leave it now i just want to get it accepted.

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ShermanJackson says

Looks so nice, however because it wasn’t accepted I would suggest the following:

for you text: Make “C” capital as it should be Two Words “PrintCloud”

The logo seems a little too broad, so why don’t you add a single drop of rain in the cloud and have a gradient of all the colors, that way you could bring the cloud closer to the text.

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oldfashioned says

+1 for the capital C.

I quite like the idea of having those multiple drops though… Maybe reduce their number to 3 and/or vary their size. This would add more variety and depth to the logo IMO .

Anyways, I think it is a awesome logo. I’m sure it’ll pass ;)

Good luck with sales! :)

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ToivoMedia says

For me the problem is the logo image and text don’t sit that well together. I think maybe, drop the symmetrical composition, maybe it would work to have the rain falling from left to right, and have the cloud more on the left of the text. So the eye would flow from the cloud, down the rain, and read the text, like so:

oOo                           
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 PrintCloud

That’s what I would try anyway :)

....That was fun making that little illustration :D

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DarkstarDesigns says

Thanks very much for the feedback on my logo guys.

I will make the “C” capital and with the drop i think the angle thing is a good idea i will give it a go.

just hope i can get it accepted.

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