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Gembell says

=== Why We’ve Declined Your Submission ===

The illustration is fairly complex, consider ways to scale and simplify the illustration to create a more balanced design and upload the strongest concept.

The overall aesthetics of the design could be improved with a font that’s better suited to the concept and refining the shape of the image.

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chrisatlemon says

I think the reviewer gave you some valuable tips here.

The shape this just too blurry and complicated, it does not have any well-defined lines, so will be difficult to apply this to your branding. It looks more like a blurred stamp then a clean logo shape.

Hope this helps

Chris

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Gembell says

I think the reviewer gave you some valuable tips here.

The shape this just too blurry and complicated, it does not have any well-defined lines, so will be difficult to apply this to your branding. It looks more like a blurred stamp then a clean logo shape.

Hope this helps

Chris

Oh yeah, thanks Chris…

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