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BenSheppard says

http://www.ohlookawebsite.com/content/

I’d love to hear you feedback on my template so far. Only done the homepage so far, decided to go at a different angle if you saw my previous knock up.

Be mean!

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AudriusR says

Hey, cool slider!

I would probably do something with that gray area in the middle.

Keep up good work!

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BenSheppard says

Hey, cool slider!

I would probably do something with that gray area in the middle.

Keep up good work!

Like add a pattern to it or something? I was just thinking of adding some noise to make it a subtle kind of background

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AudriusR says


Hey, cool slider!

I would probably do something with that gray area in the middle.

Keep up good work!
Like add a pattern to it or something? I was just thinking of adding some noise to make it a subtle kind of background

yep something like that, I probably would extend slider area and make pricing tables overlap slider a bit, or something.

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BenSheppard says

I did try that on my last template but it didn’t look too good, so thought I’d go for something a tad different

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AudriusR says

I did try that on my last template but it didn’t look too good, so thought I’d go for something a tad different

this is how I imagined +- http://www.themeblaze.com/pngs/example.png

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BenSheppard says


I did try that on my last template but it didn’t look too good, so thought I’d go for something a tad different
this is how I imagined +- http://www.themeblaze.com/pngs/example.png


That’s pretty sexy!
http://ohlookawebsite.com/freshface/ Is the template I was working on before this one
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dnp_theme says
I think you must learn how the contrast technique works:
  • You only have to make headings black on light backgrounds or white on dark background. The headings must strike first.
  • Not so bold and heavy borders, but light and almost hard to see.
  • Buttons need fine tuning and more contrast too, as headings, you want them to be touched, hovered and eventually clicked.

The content needs a ton of improvements.

Good luck and welcome to the party :)

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BenSheppard says

I think you must learn how the contrast technique works: * You only have to make headings black on light backgrounds or white on dark background. The headings must strike first. * Not so bold and heavy borders, but light and almost hard to see. * Buttons need fine tuning and more contrast too, as headings, you want them to be touched, hovered and eventually clicked.

The content needs a ton of improvements.

Good luck and welcome to the party :)

Thank you very much, definitely going to take in on board, already improving on it! :D

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