Item rejected. Need feedback.

Hi all!

My vCard template rejected twice. They said overall quality is not good.

Please help me. How can I improve its design?

It looks like the theme designed for mobile(smartphones) and it doesn’t look good with desktop computers. ( too many empty spaces ) Beside that, you should consider to replace the top area ( especially the icons /try removing the top icons and replace the close icon with good one/). Also consider about submitting the item as Mobile Template rather than vCard.

Hope this helps.

Regards.

Yigit

Hi demdous !
I love your concept ! and I find the design and content very well
But when I arrive in the Vcard I see a home page who missing some improvements compared with the portfolio page, contact page…
Then when you navigate in the pages it’s not easy to understand how to come back in the home page…
I agree with geceolurken too
Sorry for my bad english
Hope to help you !

F²

More spacing arroun the logo icons in footer are a bit oldish. Inner content is bad… you need more spacings, alingment, it feels cramped.

Thank you guys for your helps. I’ll try to fix it.

Thank you guys for your help !

Good job !