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GBREAL
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Got This Message:

Unfortunately your submission Turn It Around isn’t ready for AudioJungle and cannot be resubmitted as it did not meet our minimum requirements for quality and/or marketplace policies…

Our Review team also provided these comments:

Unfortunately, this file doesn’t meet AudioJungle’s commercial quality guidelines overall, and can’t be approved.

Audio must be fully composed, arranged, mixed and/or mastered to a commercial standard, and have reasonable potential utility to our commercial buyers.

Any ideas on what to fix? Maybe I should take off the reverb.

http://soundcloud.com/gbreal-1/turn-it-around-preview
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MichalskiMusic
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I will offer the following in the spirit of helpfulness.

1. This track really sounds like a construction kit, particularly the horns and rhythm section. There is not much variance throughout the track. The arrangement just doesn’t offer much interesting, volume doesn’t vary, the melody doesn’t move from one instrument or group of instruments to another. It’s just too static.
2. The flute loop is too dissonant for the track. It just sounds out of place.

Those are the immediate things that jump out at me. Hope this helps!

Michael

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matsteiner
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I will offer the following in the spirit of helpfulness.

1. This track really sounds like a construction kit, particularly the horns and rhythm section. There is not much variance throughout the track. The arrangement just doesn’t offer much interesting, volume doesn’t vary, the melody doesn’t move from one instrument or group of instruments to another. It’s just too static.
2. The flute loop is too dissonant for the track. It just sounds out of place.

Those are the immediate things that jump out at me. Hope this helps!

Michael

+1 from here

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Gotta agree with MichalskiMusic.

More variation, remove the flute, and less loop. (Unless you perhaps shorten and submit as loopable audio…)

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GBREAL
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Thanks for the responses.

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matsteiner
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Welcome!
But one thing I’d like to know: How did you record this track? What software/loops/VST did you use?

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