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WebDesignFudge says

Hi There

Here is a link to the live Preview, would appreciate some feedback:

Preview

Thanks in advance!

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kriskorn says

Adjust the line-height on p tags to 1.4-1.6em and it’ll look pretty solid.

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2mediax says

I like it …original :)

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Pixelous says

Awesome! Try to add line-height not 1.4em but 1.6em to all body. And maybe another hover effect for the menu.

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WebDesignFudge says

Hi Guys

Thanks for the feedback so far. Changing the line-height to 1.4em makes sense. Definitely something I will change.

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dreampunchboy says

I like it and I think it’s stunning. Here is what I think is wrong with it:

1) The View on portfolio item hover doesn’t fit with the black stroke as there is no other strokes on the site 2) Using Arial for the content is ruining your design, like seriously. 3) Personally I don’t like the search box increase in height when focus (maybe cause it alters the items below)

Just my quick opinion, other than that I love the work!

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WebDesignFudge says

I like it and I think it’s stunning. Here is what I think is wrong with it:

1) The View on portfolio item hover doesn’t fit with the black stroke as there is no other strokes on the site 2) Using Arial for the content is ruining your design, like seriously. 3) Personally I don’t like the search box increase in height when focus (maybe cause it alters the items below)

Just my quick opinion, other than that I love the work!

Thanks for your input. The search box expanding was a screw, thanks for pointing that out.

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Landonw says

I don’t know where to start – does John have ADD ? The font choice is horrible, header pattern should be WAY more subtle, the black bar at the top should be done as a ring holding up the cloth-looking logo, the thing above the slider – where were you going with that? It’s way too confusing, I’d say just remove it.

Spice up your slider, give it something unique – looks dull. Under the slider there’s this weird out-of-place stitching – get rid of that and put a subtle border or shadow.

Fix the line height, under “Method” remove the 3 dots on each column – they look out of place.

I haven’t got enough time to point out every issue, but I’d also note that on the map in the contact area you’d want a border of some sort around it.

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WebDesignFudge says

I don’t know where to start – does John have ADD ? The font choice is horrible, header pattern should be WAY more subtle, the black bar at the top should be done as a ring holding up the cloth-looking logo, the thing above the slider – where were you going with that? It’s way too confusing, I’d say just remove it.

Spice up your slider, give it something unique – looks dull. Under the slider there’s this weird out-of-place stitching – get rid of that and put a subtle border or shadow.

Fix the line height, under “Method” remove the 3 dots on each column – they look out of place.

I haven’t got enough time to point out every issue, but I’d also note that on the map in the contact area you’d want a border of some sort around it.

Thanks for your specific opinion, you brought up some good points.

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dreampunchboy says

Haha, my vrou se nounet vir my jou naam klink afrikaans :P Toe check ek jou site is .co.za

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