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uzack01
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I have an music which i have uploaded to AJ, but it was hard rejected because this reason : This submission does not meet our commercial composition/arrangement standard, unfortunately. Personally i think this music has meet the commercial arrangement, so i want to know where area must be improved so my music will be accepted by AJ from other people. Sometimes critiques open some blind spot :).

Here is my file : https://soundcloud.com/uzack01/i-am-alive

Thanks all :)

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SoundCity
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Hi Uzack, composition is ok but production sound really “midi” and not professional..

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uzack01
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Thank you for reply SoundCity. Hmm i will try to make it more professional then. Ok i will work more on this music.

Thanks once more, i really appreciate it :)

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SoundCity
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you’re welcome, mate!

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MusicBoxStudios
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I have an music which i have uploaded to AJ, but it was hard rejected because this reason : This submission does not meet our commercial composition/arrangement standard, unfortunately. Personally i think this music has meet the commercial arrangement, so i want to know where area must be improved so my music will be accepted by AJ from other people. Sometimes critiques open some blind spot :). Here is my file : https://soundcloud.com/uzack01/i-am-alive Thanks all :)

Uzack,

I think the concept is great. However, it sounds like it’s out of “sync” as far as the instruments go. Maybe a bit of quantizing would help it lock up tight? Again, I really like the idea and the melody.

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lutch
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Yes, it is “midi”

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Mellau
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Yea, the overall concept is nice, but your track is out of sync as MusicBoxStudios said.. Also the mix could be better. :)

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uzack01
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Wow thanks very much for your reply all, Maybe my quantizing not good so the sound syill out of sync. Really glad many people help me in here :)

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ThomasVoMusic
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You’ll need more dynamics so that the instruments sound a bit more realistic; it sounds like there is little to no Round Robins in the sounds at all. Comments by others on the out of sync feel of the track definitely points out the first thing I notice on the track. I think you also need to process your instruments to make them sound a bit better (reverb and EQs).

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uzack01
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Thank you ThomasVoMusic, i will add more dynamic and process instrument with reverb and EQs :)

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