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GrizzleFX says

so i have submitted two versions of this file, this is the 2nd one which got rejected. Personally i really like the form effect that i made but the reviewer obviously does not, any one have any ideas on how i can use this effect differently or any suggestions what so ever. I was thinking to have the form layer not become the icon but instead to “swim” through the screen revealing the logo. Feedback would be awesome :) heres the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qWslwYT3Q4&feature=youtu.be

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PerfectFX says
Do a little trick :)
  1. Use AudioJungle logo. (Cheat the reviewer’s eye..)
  2. Make your background really dark or totally white. (This grayish doesn’t look good..)
  3. Use different color for that flare and position it in the very middle of the screen whether above the logo or below. (‘cause the current version looks oddly..)
And if that won’t work, maybe you had to put this version together with the first one as one package?

PS. And yes.. the formation itself is pretty cool looking :)

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