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dr_alien
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Hi, I would like to ask you about your opinion before I upload this track. Do you think it sounds good ? Is it ready for audiojungle ? Thanks :) https://soundcloud.com/dr_alien/epic-intro-5 If something is wrong with soundcloud, please refresh page.
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DuilioFiorille
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I think it is absolutely acceptable for AJ. Personally I would add a bit more reverb (personal taste :-) ).

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TSGM
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The drum part is too thin in my opinion. In other words – it’s sounds not so epic as a main theme of track :)

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dr_alien
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Thanks Joseph and TSGM :)

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Auralaxiom
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Hi, I would like to ask you about your opinion before I upload this track. Do you think it sounds good ? Is it ready for audiojungle ? Thanks :) https://soundcloud.com/dr_alien/epic-intro-5 If something is wrong with soundcloud, please refresh page.

A few things. The strings NEED expression work. As it is, they are far too static. You also need quite a bit more reverb; it’s far too dry and affords no sense of space. Also, there need to me more percussion elements throughout, and what you already have is too quiet (and also too dry). Near the end, you should probably have a symbol + tympani swell before that very last section.

Even considering all this, you’re definitely on to something and I could see this track doing well here.

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dr_alien
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Thanks Auralaxiom. I’ll try to improve it :)

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